Element:
A. Setting - Once upon a time, in a forest.
B. Character - woodcutter - He is very honest and does not lie.
God of forest - He finds out who has good mine.
merchant - He is very avaricious.
Plot - The axe fall in to a pond, so the plot is the way God of forest treats between a
woodcutter and a merchant
Suspence - What will be happen God of forest do after he knew that a merchant was lying?
Theme - I should not lie even though it makes me better.
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Elements:
A. Setting - once upon a time, in a forest.
Emery: Once upon a time, in a forest (Please observe correct capitalization)
B. Character - woodcutter,God of forest and avaricious merchant
Emery: Describe each of the character.
Plot - the axe fall in to a pond.the way God of forest treats between a woodcutter and a merchant.
Emery: Please rephrase. Observe correct sentence construction and grammar.
Suspence - What happen God of forest do after he knew that a merchant was lying.
Emery: Again, rephrase. Observe your grammar.
Theme - I should not lie even though it makes me better
Emery: Observe correct punctuation.
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